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19837 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended opening driveway.

19837 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended opening driveway.

The HOMEOWNER walks out of the house looking down at his phone.

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 CUT…to him coming face-to-face with BIBERTY. And it begins.

CUT…to him coming face-to-face with BIBERTY. And it begins.

 A SINGLE of BIBERTY, as he lets the HOMEOWNER know why he’s here.

A SINGLE of BIBERTY, as he lets the HOMEOWNER know why he’s here.

 The HOMEOWNER, responding.

The HOMEOWNER, responding.

 BIBERTY, continuing, until…

BIBERTY, continuing, until…

 …a BIRD OF PREY SWOOPS IN and makes off with him…

…a BIRD OF PREY SWOOPS IN and makes off with him…

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 …to the SHOCK of the HOMEOWNER.

…to the SHOCK of the HOMEOWNER.

19817 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended ending driveway.

19817 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended ending driveway.

CUT…

 …to BIBERTY FALLING into frame…

…to BIBERTY FALLING into frame…

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 …and landing with a THUD on another car, in another driveway, shocking a NEIGHBOR who’s in the middle of washing his car…

…and landing with a THUD on another car, in another driveway, shocking a NEIGHBOR who’s in the middle of washing his car…

 …and without missing a beat, going into who he is and what he’s here for.

…and without missing a beat, going into who he is and what he’s here for.

 Now, what’s this? This…is the frame that begins the Alt. version of the opening. The one where we CUT to…

Now, what’s this? This…is the frame that begins the Alt. version of the opening. The one where we CUT to…

 …the NEIGHBOR telling us BIBERTY’S name.   NEIGHBOR: “Hey, Biberty.”

…the NEIGHBOR telling us BIBERTY’S name.

NEIGHBOR: “Hey, Biberty.”

STREET CORNER #1.

STREET CORNER #1.

And this? This…is for the Alt. ending.

The moment after the BIRD OF PREY snatches BIBERTY, we’d CUT to the NEIGHBOR, who says, “Ah, that’s too bad…nice guy.” And then CUT…to the HOMEOWNER pulling up to this STOP SIGN. When he does…

 …BIBERTY would ROLL down the sidewalk, into frame…

…BIBERTY would ROLL down the sidewalk, into frame…

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 …and then we’d CUT…

…and then we’d CUT…

 …to INSIDE the HOMEOWNER’S car, to see BIBERTY out the car window.   Biberty:  “As I was saying…”

…to INSIDE the HOMEOWNER’S car, to see BIBERTY out the car window.

Biberty: “As I was saying…”

STREET CORNER #2.

STREET CORNER #2.

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19837 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended opening driveway.

The HOMEOWNER walks out of the house looking down at his phone.

CUT…to him coming face-to-face with BIBERTY. And it begins.

A SINGLE of BIBERTY, as he lets the HOMEOWNER know why he’s here.

The HOMEOWNER, responding.

BIBERTY, continuing, until…

…a BIRD OF PREY SWOOPS IN and makes off with him…

…to the SHOCK of the HOMEOWNER.

19817 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended ending driveway.

CUT…

…to BIBERTY FALLING into frame…

…and landing with a THUD on another car, in another driveway, shocking a NEIGHBOR who’s in the middle of washing his car…

…and without missing a beat, going into who he is and what he’s here for.

Now, what’s this? This…is the frame that begins the Alt. version of the opening. The one where we CUT to…

…the NEIGHBOR telling us BIBERTY’S name.

NEIGHBOR: “Hey, Biberty.”

STREET CORNER #1.

And this? This…is for the Alt. ending.

The moment after the BIRD OF PREY snatches BIBERTY, we’d CUT to the NEIGHBOR, who says, “Ah, that’s too bad…nice guy.” And then CUT…to the HOMEOWNER pulling up to this STOP SIGN. When he does…

…BIBERTY would ROLL down the sidewalk, into frame…

…and then we’d CUT…

…to INSIDE the HOMEOWNER’S car, to see BIBERTY out the car window.

Biberty: “As I was saying…”

STREET CORNER #2.

19837 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended opening driveway.
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 CUT…to him coming face-to-face with BIBERTY. And it begins.
 A SINGLE of BIBERTY, as he lets the HOMEOWNER know why he’s here.
 The HOMEOWNER, responding.
 BIBERTY, continuing, until…
 …a BIRD OF PREY SWOOPS IN and makes off with him…
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 …to the SHOCK of the HOMEOWNER.
19817 SUPERIOR ST.—recommended ending driveway.
 …to BIBERTY FALLING into frame…
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 …and landing with a THUD on another car, in another driveway, shocking a NEIGHBOR who’s in the middle of washing his car…
 …and without missing a beat, going into who he is and what he’s here for.
 Now, what’s this? This…is the frame that begins the Alt. version of the opening. The one where we CUT to…
 …the NEIGHBOR telling us BIBERTY’S name.   NEIGHBOR: “Hey, Biberty.”
STREET CORNER #1.
 …BIBERTY would ROLL down the sidewalk, into frame…
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 …and then we’d CUT…
 …to INSIDE the HOMEOWNER’S car, to see BIBERTY out the car window.   Biberty:  “As I was saying…”
STREET CORNER #2.
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